UPDATE NOTE: In the week since this was written, he is gained another 1000 followers!!! - JoSV
Aug 5, 2011
MOMMIES, GOD & A REAL HOUSEWIFE OF NEW JERSEY
UPDATE NOTE: In the week since this was written, he is gained another 1000 followers!!! - JoSV
Jan 19, 2011
Contest for DIVERGENT
So we have this book coming out called DIVERGENT by Veronica Roth in May. And it is made of awesomesauce (and paper and binding, of course). If you want to know what it's about, just listen to Veronica give you the details herself:
I met Veronica at a conference in Indiana (shout out to MWW!), and I could tell right away that she was just an all around great gal because she laughed at my weird jokes. (Now that I think about it, maybe she was just being polite....). I discovered that she was professional and talented as well as we corresponded after the conference. Then she sent me Divergent. And then I started reading. A few sleepless nights later and everyone in my office was buzzing over it. It was time to make The Call--which included a black out, a storm, driving all around Long Island for reception, and a late night rendezvous to Steak n' Shake. You don't want to know. I'm just happy I was able to get through to her!
Now most people will have to wait for pub date to read this. But for one lucky winner here, you can win a copy by entering this contest!
The winner will be chosen at random and the results posted.
**You have until 11:59pm EST on Monday, 1/24! Enter quick!
Jan 12, 2011
Good News and Winner!
Oct 29, 2010
Susan and Cookies
Sep 30, 2010
Original Contest delayed....




Sep 14, 2010
What a DAY, man


I'm so excited to read this book! I've heard nothing but good things about it! Really hope I win :D
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Sep 13, 2010
The Brooklyn Book Festival
So I am a recent New York transplant. I moved to the east coast from the Southern California suburbs. There are so many things I’ve loved about New York so far: restaurants open past nine; cupcakes; being able to get everywhere on the subway; Central Park; weekend brunches; more cupcakes. But the thing I love most is the dedication this city has to books.
Yesterday, a group of people (including Suzie Townsend, Mer Barnes, and the awesome FP/NC interns) and I went to a sprawling, panel-packed, outdoor event called the Brooklyn Book Festival. In the rain. “Too bad about the weather,” I thought on the way over. “I bet a lot of people will stay home.”
Ha.
I had only heard stories about the BBF. I knew it was a big festival, and a much-anticipated one. But I could not have imagined just how awesome it would be.
After wandering through the various booths,
I went with literary agent Roseanne Wells to a panel on the food movement in Brooklyn called "Brooklyn's Cookin'"; it featured several very talented chefs with new cookbooks out, and with restaurants in Brooklyn that I now need to eat at.
From left to right, we have Frank Falcinelli (The Frankies Spuntino), Ramin Ganeshram (Sweet Hands: Island Cooking from Trinidad and Tobego), Amy Besa (Memories from Philippine Kitchens), and Frank Castronovo (also of The Frankies Spuntino).
Following that was another panel, this time a YA (a favorite genre for both Rosie and I) called "Happily Ever After?" that focused on characters who are forced to relive their pasts and come to terms with haunting memories after committing terrible acts.
After more book browsing, and after popping into a few more panels, we called it a day.
But not before a snagged a book for you lovely readers.
Bamboo People by Mitali Perkins is up for grabs today! Just leave a comment on this post by the end of the day Wednesday, and we’ll have the winner up on Thursday.
If you don’t win this one, no worries! I’ll be sure to bring back more books next year. Can’t wait!
-Sara
Aug 24, 2010
Your Monday Giveaway. On a Tuesday.
Aug 8, 2010
A Late Night Winner
Aug 6, 2010
WriteOnCon + Wed Winner + News!

Aug 2, 2010
Monday, Monday--So Good to Me. Er, to You!
And for those of you who haven't read the comments, the fabulous Holly came up with this killer Query Checklist, modeled off the few sentences I shared about 13 Reasons Why:
"1) Premise: who is this about (in this case, teenage guy named Clay)
2) Inciting incident: what happens to Clay to rock his world (tape arrives on door)
3) Conflict: What does the inciting incident make the MC do? (find out why she recorded tapes and killed herself)
4) Character motivation: Why does the inciting incident make the MC do #3 (because she was the one girl he loved)
If set up well, this is enough information to hook me!"
YES! This is, point by point, what I would love to see in every query. And that is such an awesome, concise list. Thanks, Holly!
The other thing a lot of you mentioned is the dreaded "I am so close to my characters and story that I am inclined to over-share because OMG I LOVE THEM and want to tell you everything" curse.
As far as writing problems go, I think this is actually a pretty great one. Passion is a much looked for, much loved quality in writers--not only because it means you love your work and will promote the heck out of it, but because it generally means you are passionate about writing itself, and thus very dedicated to continue practicing the craft.
So. I love that you love your story. Trust me, agents want to love it, too. But knowing everything up front rarely (if ever) garners that response. That passion that you have, the same one you want agents to have, comes by hooking and luring.
I have a weird metaphor for this. You know the claw-machines with the stuffed animals inside? Those things ate my allowance every month when I was a kid. My mom frequently reminded me that I could go *buy* a stuffed animal for the kind of money I was blowing. But that wasn't the point. The point was that I wanted to win it. I wanted to feel like I had wanted it, and worked for it, and then won.
Overall, that's how you want readers (and agents) to feel about your book--you want them to develop a personal relationship with the story. Readers should start by caring about the characters, and once they do, have to struggle through the inciting incident with them, so that when the story ends, they feel they have earned the ending through the emotional investment they made with the character/story. And for an agent, that bonding process begins with the query. An overview of the whole story is not going to accomplish what a connection to the main character or the plot set-up will. Agents have to want to invest themselves in the story.
Samantha C. cited an excellent piece of advice from the always amazing Kristin Nelson: write a query based on the first fifty pages of your story. That number of pages should cover a connection to the character, as well as the set-up for the main problem/incident your character will face.
And as a thank you for the thoughtful comments/love you've been showing the blog, we have a giveaway for you!
Also because it is Monday, and this seems like a good way to cure any Monday blues. We'll try to brighten up many more of your Mondays in the future with more free books :)
Today, we have The Writer's Little Helper, by James V. Smith, Jr. It's filled with great checklists, Q&As, and tools for your writing.
To win, leave a comment! It does not have to be about anything in particular. Although if you wanted to share what you were spending all of your allowance on while I spent every last quarter trying to hook stuffed animals, I'd love to hear.
Well, every quarter I had leftover from book-shopping, anyways. A girl has to have priorities.
*Enter the contest by midnight Wednesday (tomorrow) night!